# Paper edit (numbered script), source: raw.mp4

Clock: edited time t = source time - 0.40 s. One continuous take, no internal cuts (D-05): the speaker has no retakes, no slips and pauses of 0.24 to 1.24 s between words (ASR times); the two longest, 0.76 s (3.30-4.06, the question keyword resolves in it) and 1.24 s (13.64-14.88, the title card lands in it), are kept as beats, so every pause stays and lip sync never breaks. Head trimmed to 0.40 s (silence ends at 0.59 s), tail ends at source 69.40 s (last word ends 68.96 s; never faded).

| # | Source | Edited | Words (ASR corrected: "consultasavogado" -> "consultasabogado", confirmed by the site's own title) | Weight |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 0.59-3.30 | 0.19-2.90 | What if you could reach 62 million new clients? | 3 (hook) |
| 2 | 4.06-11.08 | 3.66-10.68 | If you market to Hispanic Americans, you'll reach the fastest growing community demographic in America and increase your earnings. | 2 |
| 3 | 11.32-13.64 | 10.92-13.24 | So how can you reach these clients? | 2 (turn) |
| 4 | 14.88-19.30 | 14.48-18.90 | consultasabogado.com connects attorneys like you with Hispanic clients. | 3 (the product) |
| 5 | 19.84-22.32 | 19.44-21.92 | You can sign up for a no-cost membership now. | 2 |
| 6 | 22.88-34.62 | 22.48-34.22 | When a Hispanic client in your area needs an attorney, they'll find you on consultasabogado.com, along with reviews, your services, and more, so they know you are the attorney for them. | 2 (how it works) |
| 7 | 34.98-36.86 | 34.58-36.46 | You'll reach underserved clients. | 2 |
| 8 | 37.16-41.00 | 36.76-40.60 | Tapping into a client base your competitors may not even be targeting. | 1 |
| 9 | 41.44-43.62 | 41.04-43.22 | Great for your ad spend and results. | 1 |
| 10 | 43.94-46.68 | 43.54-46.28 | And you can join now with a no-cost membership. | 2 |
| 11 | 47.32-53.66 | 46.92-53.26 | You need to stand out from other law firms in your area and find a niche, and this is how to do it. | 2 |
| 12 | 53.66-60.98 | 53.26-60.58 | When you join consultasabogado.com, you'll have a new lead source in marketing that's always working for you. | 2 |
| 13 | 61.50-62.06 | 61.10-61.66 | Don't wait! | 1 (hit) |
| 14 | 62.36-68.04 | 61.96-67.64 | You have Hispanic clients looking for your services at consultasabogado.com. | 3 (call to action) |
| 15 | 68.44-68.96 | 68.04-68.56 | Join now! | 2 |

Lines graded 3: 3 of 15 (20%): the hook (1), the product (4) and the call to action (14), within the 25% budget.
Retakes: none. Fillers: none detected. Spoken claims checked in `ice/research/COMPLIANCE.md`.

Versions: master only (`ice/plan/versions.md`).
